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Boldened hearts so burning bright
sharing their internal light
darkness driven far away
sunlight ever here to stay

Gleaming gold with flecks of stars
sparkling silver from afar
shines illuminating light
banishing the dark of night

Smiles both smoldering and sweet
light the room when gazes meet
hearts emboldened and ablaze
sharing joy and happy days.
©2008-2009 *JemimaAslana
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Author's Comments

Behold, I've done it again. This time way more cheesy than the sonnet. At least sonnets retain a bit a class and style. This is just cheesy.

Don't bother critiquing, I know this is worthless, but it's been written and I felt like making a fool of myself, so now I'm posting it XD

Read at your own risk!

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Cheesy indeed. Yet, in it's overflowing state of melting cheese, it is tasty. Ever had something that is too rich with flavour that all you can do is stare at it in awe?
Well, this is kind of like that. Very rich in meaning, that can be speculated in many different ways.

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